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12月1日

Rhyme is a gift


I am prolific, intellectually gifted
my mind races at the speed of sound
in my ambition, my logic is found.
 
Tap, tap ,tap
my feet on the ground,
brace the heavens for my bodies break through
break out....break down..
This my trip to cloud 9...
 
My fluffy fascinations
make it one step closer cloud 10.
My eyes see in color,
my minds eyes dreams in rhyme
my teeth a chatter with my beat
a little off in it's time.
 
Beads of sweat trickle
as my tingling lips begin to tickle,
sweet soft kisses drink you in
body still as I spit this,
see my face as my soul misses...
the orbit to your celestial fantasy.
 
Tap, tap, tap
my feet in the heavens
unconscious life has ended
elevate my being to this new plane
do not think that I am fruitless in this vison
for I am driven.
 
Tap, tap, tap
my head against the sky
my intellect my tongues new dialect
never just getting by,
the search and hunger for knowledge
an ever fleeting task.
In the end, I will be the one who will bask
in the glory of true wisdom
with my faith I believe
that a love of rhyme
will span the test of time
making others believe.
~AF~

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gash发表:

Yay!!! I'm adorable! hehe! JK!

Yah using the different colors is fun. I like people to have fun reading, and not be bored. haha! I really like the purple and black though. i just thought it got to be too much maybe....lol

Well, hope your doing good! My sister just had a baby, and I know she'll be feeling "the busyness" of it too! But its so worth it huh? cant wait to see my niece!

take care

ashleyxoxo

12 月 13 日
gash发表:
Hey!!!
Yah, I love getting new comments! Not a lot of people come to my site either! haha.
I like your site too! Glad ya liked mine. I write poetry, but I dont post it. Scared people will copy it I guess.
Anyways, talk to you later! Keep up the good work!
ashleyxoxo
12 月 12 日
gash发表:
Hey!
Wow, great poem. I love to write poems, and yours are great too!!!
Talk to you later
ashleyxoxo
12 月 11 日
Nicci发表:
 

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((¸¸.·´ ..·´ -:¦:-Hola Aimee,

Thank you so much for taking a moment to come on by and say  •ิ.•ั HI!  •ิ.•ั  in my  ~SHOF Shoutout Time to Appreciate~ Many don’t realize how warming it can be to see people making a momnent in thier lives to say hi, ask how you are and leave some caring behind.  So here I am in an attempt to return the warmth and kindness.

Your poetry grows stronger and stronger.... not only the way it flows but the visions your words bring to life in the minds eye as you read through the melodic tone of each verse....

Yes the season is upon us ... with that comes the stress of being an adult and the missing of the wonderment of being a child during this time of year where everything just seem magical... I do believe if we keep our inner child alive, run, play, laugh, experience as we did then .. we too can savor this time of year and be filled with that magical feeling... so let your little ones eyes be yours for a while and I bet you will feel what you felt years past

 (.)””(.) 
 ( ’o’, )
()Hugs() 
 (_)-(_) ⓐⓛⓦⓐⓨⓩ ⓑⓔ ⓣⓡⓤⓔ ⓣⓞ ⓤ ♥Nicci♥
Happiness keeps You Sweet, 
Trials keep You Strong, 
Sorrows keep You Human, 
Failures keep You Humble, 
Success keeps You Glowing, 
But Only You keep You Going!

12 月 1 日

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